Provide A Critique Of This Memo In Terms Of Its Clarity, Its Organization

1. Provide a critique of this memo in terms of its clarity, its organization, its effectiveness in delivering a message. Write a few sentences in your response. 2. Provide a critique of this memo in terms of its grammar and mechanics, with a minimum of 3 identified errors. 3. Re-write the memo, improving it in the areas mentioned above. Post your improved memo to the class in your response to this thread.